Friday, July 26, 2013

Topic 7

This summer, I learned a lot of good things. My family and I went to  Disneyland and we had fun their.We went to a huge Outlet and we bought a lot of clothes for us and for our relatives. I  attend the summer semester in ALP. I learned in composition and grammar class how to writ essay such as  descriptive paragraph, opinion paragraph, compare essay and cause and effect essay.Also, I learned form grammar how can I make an adjective clause , adverb clause or noun clause. However, I learned how can I correct the error sentence, so now I  can know if any sentence has fragments, run-on, or comma splice.So, I am so proud that Ms.Tong taught me.   

 In the future, I already have conditional admission from CSUF. After I graduate from university, I would like to work for a few years to gain experience. After that, I would like to open my own consulting company.         

Friday, July 19, 2013

topic 6

I would tell him that you before you come to U.S.A, there are somethings you have to know it. First, you have to study hard and attend your classes . So, to improve yourself and to enhance your skills you should to speak English in you daily life. Also, you have to use many ways to challenge your shay and scares. However, do not expect when you come here you see easy life. Living in USA  is stressful. Finally, to be better than before face your problem, and try to solve it by yourself.

Friday, July 5, 2013

topic 4

      Mecaa is the beautiful place I have ever visited. Mecca city is in Saudi Arabia.There is a very beautiful nature.There are many mountains. Also, the weather is very nice. When I was in Mecaa I went to desert with my friends. actuality, we had lot of fun their. There are three million of Muslims visit  Mecca every year for Haj and Omra. In Mecaa, I recommend you to visit Mecaa because its nice place.