Topic 7

This summer, I learned a lot of good things. My family and I went to  Disneyland and we had fun their.We went to a huge Outlet and we bought a lot of clothes for us and for our relatives. I  attend the summer semester in ALP. I learned in composition and grammar class how to writ essay such as  descriptive paragraph, opinion paragraph, compare essay and cause and effect essay.Also, I learned form grammar how can I make an adjective clause , adverb clause or noun clause. However, I learned how can I correct the error sentence, so now I  can know if any sentence has fragments, run-on, or comma splice.So, I am so proud that Ms.Tong taught me.   

 In the future, I already have conditional admission from CSUF. After I graduate from university, I would like to work for a few years to gain experience. After that, I would like to open my own consulting company.